2011年12月英语四级考试写作预测(3):大学生花销

七彩焰阳

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic ExtravagantSpending on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:
    1）据调查显示，现在大学生每月的花销越来越高，很多大学生花钱如流水，根本没有节俭的概念
    2）分析产生这一现象的原因
    3）我的看法
    【思路点拨】
    本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出校园内的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象 解释型作文。
    根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生花钱没有节制的现象；分析导致大学生这种消费习惯的 原因；阐述“我”对大学生消费观的看法。
    Extravagant Spending on College Campus
    According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their mind. They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society. This extravagant spending is mainly caused by the following factors.
    First of all, nowadays most ofstudents are the only children of their families. They are the apple in their family's eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Thirdly, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tends to need more money. Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.
    From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.

雨点点

大学校园内的奢侈消费

据调查，近年来大学生每月开支一直在急剧上升。许多大学生花钱如水，并在他们心中没有节约的概念。他们想当然的认为他们把钱从他们的父母在他们进入社会。这种奢侈的开支，主要是以下因素造成的。

首先，现在多数学生是独生子女的家庭。他们是家庭中的宝贝，自然得到更多的关心和零用钱。其次，随着生活水平的提高，家长可以负担较高子女的开支。第三，有些学生喜欢追求时尚和趋势，这往往需要更多的钱。最后，校园爱情也可能是一个因素造成奢侈消费。

从我的角度看，一个大学生，作为一个纯粹的消费者，应该学会节俭。我们必须限制我们的开支是日常必需品，但不买任何我们想要的不论其价格。节俭的习惯，可以帮助我们形成正确的价值观，有利于我们未来的发展。